Last week on Monday I had time to do a free write, for my free writing I chose to do a little bit on a baby orangutan with no mother due to deforestation, this has an huge impact on this orangutan like many others because of losing its mother so young in his life.
What did I enjoy:
I enjoyed including deforestation in my writing, reminding people of what deforestation has an impact on.
What did I do well:
I think I done well in making my writing interesting.
What could I improve on:
I could improve on adding more writing.
Kia ora. I am Selina from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your piece of writing.
I learnt that instead of doing a game or something else, you wanted to write.
Maybe you could give us a part 2? Maybe.
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Selina