The figure of mysterys.

 W.A.L.T use the power writing process to structure and write a narrative that intrests an audience.

"Crreeeckk" as the floor boards roared. "what was that?" I said, as I walked up the stairs the noise suddenly came to a end. I started to run up I tripped as a tall figure wearing all black clothes, when I got up the mysterious figure and all my stuff was gone in a flash. I ran to the phone but it was as burnt as toast on a monday morning.

So I ran outside and got ran over by a police car. When I woke up I was getting rushed into the hospital and then my head went blank. as my eyes went blurry I saw blood run out of my legs I fainted... to be continued.

What I did good - I used descriptive words.

what I could work on - writing more.