For today my classes writing was on a prompt. My prompt was about a mother and a son that were stuck in the middle of the worst hurricane recorded in human history. here is my writing...
What I think I done well - used descriptive words
what I could have done better - used more characters speaking.
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Morning Rani, you have used lots of good descriptive words in your writing. I like cosmic and your use of metaphors. Tino Pai Rani
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