Holidays.

 On the holidays I went diving with my mum and we got heaps of Kina at Rangiputa beach. here is my writing about it.

Why it was fun? - because I love the water and swimming.

What could I have done to improve this activity? - I could have stayed in the water longer.

Do you like diving too? - "write in the comments."

writing.

 For today my classes writing was on a prompt. My prompt was about a mother and a son that were stuck in the middle of the worst hurricane recorded in human history. here is my writing...

What I think I done well - used descriptive words

what I could have done better - used more characters speaking.

Thank you for reading my blog, have a good day.

create something to write about.

 For writing my class had to make something and write about it. so here is mine.

What I done well - done as much descriptive words as I could.

what I could improve on - write more.

Thank you for reading my blog

Man and sea

 For reading my class done questions about a book called "Man and sea". when we had finished the task we had to make a blog post of it so here is mine.

What I think I done good - I think I answered the questions as best as I could.

What I could Improve on - I should have learnt more about the questions.

Thank you for reading my blog

going outside in lockdown.

 Last week my mum, two sisters and I went out on our farm to go for a walk and find the boundaries of our fence. First we had to go down my drive way and get to the gate to go for our adventure. I even brung a survival bag with water and food just incase. When we got to the gate the adventure began. the mud was like sinking sand and I had gotten stuck many times. The hills were tall but my family still concured them.the sun shone and the birds started to sing with the wind. I glanced up at the sky and my eyes started to water because I had looked up at the sun on accident. when we had made it back to the bottom of our hill my mum and sisters rode our quad bike back home but I wanted to push my self so I went up on foot. It was very hard and I was very proud of my mum, sisters and I for completing the walk and making it up the many steep hills.  we had gotten lost on the way back. I might have gotten stuck a few times and my sisters fell over a bit but luckily nothing serious had happened and we got back home safely.

what I liked about the walk? - I liked being with my family in the outdoors and really pushing my self to do more.

What I could have done to make the activity better? - I don't think I could have done better.

Question - Are you a outside or inside person?

Thank you for reading my blog hope you have a good day!

Reduce.

 Today we are learning about reducing to help the world live longer. Think about ways that will help even if your young you can still make a impact. 

-you can recycle 

-you could conserve power by turning off the lights when you leave the room.

- you could use electric cars or use public transport or even ride a bike because that makes you healthy and doesn't release gases.

- try to drive less

- turn off the tap when your not using the water

- shop wisely, bye goods from your country.

And always remember you can make a difference!

The figure of mysterys.

 W.A.L.T use the power writing process to structure and write a narrative that intrests an audience.

"Crreeeckk" as the floor boards roared. "what was that?" I said, as I walked up the stairs the noise suddenly came to a end. I started to run up I tripped as a tall figure wearing all black clothes, when I got up the mysterious figure and all my stuff was gone in a flash. I ran to the phone but it was as burnt as toast on a monday morning.

So I ran outside and got ran over by a police car. When I woke up I was getting rushed into the hospital and then my head went blank. as my eyes went blurry I saw blood run out of my legs I fainted... to be continued.

What I did good - I used descriptive words.

what I could work on - writing more.