On the holidays I went diving with my mum and we got heaps of Kina at Rangiputa beach. here is my writing about it.
Why it was fun? - because I love the water and swimming.
What could I have done to improve this activity? - I could have stayed in the water longer.
Do you like diving too? - "write in the comments."
Hi Rani, I like your blog post and yes i do love diving it is fun.
ReplyDeleteNext time remember to re-read your writing because I found a few mistakes, But it is a great blog post.
Well Done!
Thanks!
DeleteHi Rani I love do you a blog post it's really good and yes I do like diving to its fun next time remember to re-read your writing and check capital letters and full stops but others than that it is really good.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, Rani. I really love your story that you wrote. Yes, I love diving! I went diving in Fiji and it was great! Maybe next time you can copy and paste your story instead of embedding it.
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